Hello everyone, how’s your weekend going? Hopefully, it’s full of fun and happiness. 🙂
As you know, I love dabbling in a bit of micro-fiction, regularly taking part in Nicola Auckland’s challenge, over on Sometimes Stellar Storyteller (hit the link to view the entries for the current prompt, maybe have a go yourself and ooh, vote…for me…if you want…no pressure!)
This week’s theme is OBSERVATION and I’ve gone with the following entry:
Sipping coffee, he studied her, unnoticed.
However last week, the prompt was LEGEND. I managed a very respectable third place with…
She upset the scholars’ prophecies, daily.
I’ll admit though, that I found the theme quite difficult to contain within six words without going for something very obvious. Other ones I considered were:
“The Chosen One?”
“The ONLY one.”
and…
To townsfolk: champion.
To Masters: problematic..
Seeing as I kept spilling past my word count, I had a bash at a ‘longer’ piece of micro-fiction.
My blogging friend Pat (Game of Thrones guru, all-round lovely guy) is a veteran of micro-fiction, having penned it for three years now. He regularly tweets his creations, ensuring they fit within the 140 character limit, along with the all important #microstory.
Pat was thinking of putting them all together in a book, but for the time being has decided on the pretty cool idea of having some printed on t-shirts. So, he has compiled three years worth of tiny tweet-able tales in a ‘macro-edition’ post. I urge you to check them out and let him know which you think would work well on shirts. (It’s a long read – I’m only half way through it myself – but he really is good at this type of concise writing, so if you are a fan of them too, you need to read him!)
Anywho, as I said, I thought I’d have a go at these tweety tales too. So, for the first time ever, here are my #microstory offerings for LEGEND. Let me know whether you think I did alright! (And I’m totally fine if you think they were rubbish too!) 🙂
Minstrels happily sang of his deeds. But not all. Some he had silenced… #microstory
“Each scroll, every glyph denotes a HE. It is known.”
“Lies!” she said. #microstory
Warriors fought, scholars debated, centuries passed. It would be ‘lost’ until it heard the right heroes ask the right questions #microstory
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These are all great Haylee. 🙂 The first of the microfictions is my favourite, though – I love the hint of a much darker story.
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I really enjoyed writing them – everyone seems to prefer a more sinister tone though!
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Fascinating literary form,really intriguing, something I want to explore much further.
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Thanks Charlie, you should try it out with Nicola’s weekly challenge!
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Excellent, excellent, excellent.
Firstly, I love your entry to the six word story challenge this week. It could be an emerging love story or something more sinister. I always tend to drift towards the sinister myself.
Secondly, taking last week’s prompt and turning it into Pat’s now legendary (see what I did there?) #microstory concept is an awesome idea. I think we should all do it! The images really set the stories apart. My favourite is the third one, it feels like a saga waiting to pounce.
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Thanks very much Nicola! I’d like to think this week’s attempt is (as yet) unrequited love but it definitely has the markings of stalking. As for the #microstories it’s been a nice challenge, especially trying to fit them into a tweet. Maybe you could do a special edition of the Stellar Storyteller challenge. Pat is a pro though!!
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He is, I feel he would have the edge on us. maybe he should run the challenge!
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Good idea! I’m sure we could persuade him between the two of us!
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Pat ‘s #microfiction stories are wonderful. I’d love to join in with such a challenge if he can be persuaded to run it. 🙂
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I shall run it past him and tell him we’re all on board 🙂
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Oh… I love them all! And the guy at the top with his coffee…. I want him. 🙂
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Thank you – I actually thought of you when I found the image!!
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Aww… really?? That is so sweet! Yes, I love a man with messy dark hair… and coffee…
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Hahaha. His coffee cup is soooooooo small!
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That way he needs many refills and can observe longer…
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Okay, professorish theory: he actually has cherry juice in there.
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That would be so much nicer than coffee!
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These are all so good! And I love the images you are selecting as companion pieces.
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Phew! I’m pleased you think they’re okay, thank you! As for the images, there were so many great ones after searching for ‘legends’ and ‘heroes’ – I do love the artwork on deviantart!
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They’re better than okay! Hey, congratulations on making it to the top three in Nicola’s weekly challenge. You always bring great stories, and I love this week’s observation one.
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☺️ thank you (again!) Are you not entering this week?
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I haven’t thought of one yet! (I’m so slack today. Hopefully something will come to me.)
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I’m sure it will – look forward to your ‘observations’ 😉
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I love them all. The second one is my favorite. 🙂
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Thank you Brenda, glad you approve of them!
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Each one is fantastic. 🙂
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